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Critiques


:iconspectralmerc:
This and The Patient are outstanding work. Since you requested critique on both, I will post critique on both :)

I think the best in this picture is the model. I don't say because YOU are the model. I say it because this (as well as The Patient) are pictures where everything lies on the model's shoulder. Hence, the pose and the expression are everything, and seeing that amount of expression both in the face and the hands add a lot to the picture.

However, there are things that contribute to make this a work of art. Not only is the color palette terribly well chosen, but the cigar post process is flawless, and lends an immediate atmosphere to what's inside the frame. The wardrobe, while very basic, is extremely suggestive in it's own vintage way, and succeeds on setting a whole ambience that might have been lost if it weren't there.

A fantastic picture, with a great ambience, fantastic model and outstanding execution.
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:iconicefirex:
Gorgeous work, love her expression.

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Inhale, Exhale, Forget to Breathe.
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:iconxandi5anders:
Mel, this one sooo stands out. I adore your baddassery here.

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I own Ron Weasley and Artie Abrams :heart:
Oh my Jareth!
"Listen close to everybody's heart and hear that breaking sound"
"Jellybean you can never comprehend the intellect of her mind"
"I can't on my own change [the world], but I can start with me."
:iconbruuno:
This picture is very neat, the setting, the colors, all I don't get is the pose. What's with that?
:iconshyy71:
Agree !

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One that does not mesure the true worth of present will never quite grasp the vacuity of time...
:iconmeluxine:
Who wants to pose like everyone else?

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I place no reliance on virgin or pigeon
My method is science my aim is religion
:iconmeluxine:
With who?

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I place no reliance on virgin or pigeon
My method is science my aim is religion
:icondecarabia69:
Love your expressive pose and face, Mel - you certainly stand out among models!

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You ain't so bad your self.
I see a resemblace of H.R. Giger as well as R.S Connett
Peter S Sibrin
:iconbruuno:
The kentucky fried jesus does o.O
:iconshyy71:
with the critique, excellent pic, close to the sharon stone series, but honestly, you re much better, more powerful in that pose

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One that does not mesure the true worth of present will never quite grasp the vacuity of time...

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