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©2009 *Meluxine
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Artist's Comments

So the cat was okay, I just got a big broom and prodded it. Yes it really was that obvious. People think they need comicbook heroes for everything they can't be bothered doing themselves :roll:

Next 'drama' is that fucking vague looking spacecraft anal probe looking thing that's been following me around with that weird metallic puppy dog face for weeks. I've told it several times, I DON'T. FUCK. INANIMATES.

I

DON'T

FUCK

INANIMATES

This thing can travel between galaxies, speak the language of every civilisation in the Universe and will beat you at Sudoku within 0.5 of a millisecond, and yet it can't fucking understand the meaning of NO, TITANIUM PROBES ARE NOT A TURN ON, ACTUALLY! Go fuck a Volvo, that'll kill your electrotransmitted libido!

It's amazing how people/objects think that comicbook heroes will do pretty much everything. Much like GWC with nude models *budum fucking ching*

:iconmastertouch: thinks I say fuck too much.

~MattBylett likes to make latex that attracts pervert spacecraft [link] [link]

Critiques


:iconpaulvdaley:
I've kept this on my watchlist page for a while. I wanted to give a critique, but needed time to do it.

I like this piece a lot.

Vision: This does not look like a 'let's just start putting things on the canvas and see what we get' sort of image. It looks well planned, either on paper or by some kind of sketch (in your brain or otherwise). The colors are very nicely done: there are only two. Anything that isn't cold, is hot basically. Even though the 'hot' (the woman) only provides a glimpse before she is covered in shadow, the viewer knows what is going on there. The 'cold' uses naturally occurring elements, such as the lights in the alley, to provide compositional cues that reinforce that all eyes need to be on the woman.

Originality: Well, we see a lot of sexy women doing sexy things around here, so it takes something new to stand out. This does. She's just walking, probably not quickly, with that whip in what looks like a dangerous place. I think even a hardened thug would give her a wide berth. That qualifies as sexy for me.

Technique: I can't find any flaws. Well, maybe the fog has a couple rough spots, but that's nit-picky and may be intentional.

Impact: Like I said before, you made this a week ago and I've kept on my watchlist page so that I had a reminder to come back to it. In a sea of stuff that's nice to look at, this piece floats to the top. Thanks for posting this.
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:iconnsaia:
Fucking inconsiderate alien species! Seriously, they can travel across galaxies and yet haven't learnt the word NO in one Earth language?!

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I'd rather die than become anything like everybody. I hope I die before I ever start to feel, start to feel ordinary.
:icondecarabia69:
Absolutely dramatic photo and pose, Mel! Is THIS a real location too or was my favorite Australian heroine PhotoShopped in? :)

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You ain't so bad your self.
I see a resemblace of H.R. Giger as well as R.S Connett
Peter S Sibrin
:iconcircusgothik:
great

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<3 A&M <(^-^)>
:icondonkill:
Fucking sensitve artist always fucking complaining about fucking stuff.Awesome fucking photo looks like fucking barberrella Good Fucking Bye!!!:wtf:

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All the world is just a stage-To bad i cant act
:iconprinceofpeace1237:
Good work, its like somthing out of a comic book, very pretty as usual:)

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Psalm 91:7
A thousand shall fall at thy side, and ten thousand at thy right hand; but it shall not come nigh thee.
:iconian-x:
Amazing image. I love the sense of atmosphere and story. :)

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:icondieterderblau:
FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCKITY FUCK, NO you don't say FUCK ENOUGH... This picture kicks ass on so many levels, I don't know where to begin, so I won't. FUCKING BAD-FUCKING-ASS!!! KK?

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Dieter der Blau
Aka
Rev. Shawn Erin Duggins I

"Whomever said that 'The Pen is mightier than the Sword' has obviously never been HIT with a sword."
:iconmelagan:
Hmm...head back with mostly closed eyes.

;)

I'm just teasing. I think this one is just as great as the rest of your stuff. I'd love to shoot you sometime, yet I doubt you'll be in the States any time soon, let alone my particular area.

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"It's never too late to become what you may have been."
--George Eliot

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